The autumn angel [quatern]

by Elynnka   Nov 27, 2006


My graceful beauty crowned with leaves
Bestow my heart with joy and ease
And fold thy wings around my soul
When demons want to take control.

I pray to thee down on my knees,
My graceful beauty crowned with leaves,
Hear my whispers and answer me
With your sweet voice so gracefully.

Delicate your face painted fair
Surrounded by thy splendid hair,
My graceful beauty crowned with leaves
Fallen red and yellow down from trees.

Embrace me when cold raindrops fall
And save me from the spider’s crawl;
Shelter me from perils as these,
My graceful beauty crowned with leaves.

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A Quatern is a sixteen line French form composed of four quatrains. It is similar to the Kyrielle and the Retourne. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two, third line of stanza three, and fourth line of stanza four. A quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Oh, I like this one as well. I love to read formed poetry and you do a great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Oh wow.. i love this poem.. its soo idk peaceful almost.. lol great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Delicate your face painted fair
    Surrounded by thy splendid hair,
    ((These are the weakest lines.. I'm not sure why, I just didn't like them))
    Embrace me when cold raindrops fall
    And save me from the spider’s crawl;
    ((These are the best.. and the most amazing. I feel in love when I read them. Great job.))

    Very, very nice. You mastered this style very well. I just recently wrote a Quatern myself. =]
    Anyways, this is beautifully written. English not being your first language, you write with such sheer easiness it's amazing. It baffles me. Great job.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5