Delicate your face painted fair
Surrounded by thy splendid hair,
((These are the weakest lines.. I'm not sure why, I just didn't like them))
Embrace me when cold raindrops fall
And save me from the spider’s crawl;
((These are the best.. and the most amazing. I feel in love when I read them. Great job.))

Very, very nice. You mastered this style very well. I just recently wrote a Quatern myself. =]
Anyways, this is beautifully written. English not being your first language, you write with such sheer easiness it's amazing. It baffles me. Great job.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

Oh wow.. i love this poem.. its soo idk peaceful almost.. lol great job!

Oh, I like this one as well. I love to read formed poetry and you do a great job!