by xxxlOvElY sWeEtHeArTxxx Nov 27, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Your all alone, |
by Lonely Rider
Very beautifully written...very touching... |
by Crystal Gaze
This piece needs to be edited slightly, However I think overall the emotions carried the piece. It was quite sad, and touching. |
Im so sorry. |
by Wereallbladesarntwe
Very sweet, and forget about the flow etc, its sweet cause its from the heart, whats it matter how its spelt etc? it dosent, well done x P |
by Brandon Lee
You have a few spelling mistakes. It is a good poem. It made me feel sad. which is a good thing. You are able to captivate emotions. 5* |