I loved the wording in this poem - as I did with the title. It could maybe have been developed a little bit more, and maybe a tad bit longer, but I really thought the expressions and word-choice was superb. =]

This was a good poem, the beginning of it flows very well and I like how you took the title Crimson Artworks and put it in the poem [i'm sure you did just opposite of that but hey..] The ending seemed to end very trite, other than that I liked it [:

I LoVe YOuR pOeM MuCh VeRy!!!!!
PrEtYfUlL PoEm, Me lIkE mUcH VeRy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OXOXOXOXO :) :0 ;)

Wow this is really good! I loved the flow of it and I loved the last stanza. It was a great write but also sad. 5/5

Artificial peace
((This is my favorite line...I'm not sure why..))

I liked this. Not the best cutting poem I've read, but somewhat orginal. That's why I liked it. A different way to express it.
It was very simple, and sometimes that's the best poem.
Nicely done.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

Great poem. I loved the word choice. Keep up the good work. 5/5

That was very well written..very simple yet charming..i liked the simplicity and the wording..verynice:D

Hmm... i think you could improve it more... but as it is, its a good write... i liked the words you used... and the last stanza was interesting... you put a new or at least if not new then different meaning to cutting... nice job

~angel~

Nicely written. I am not one for dark poems but this was very well written. Good Job!

Peace, Joe

I can't lie this type of thing is beyond me but this poem was very very good. i was blown away. no joke

Wow!!! i love this poem...very very very excellent. good use of words.loved it alot.5/5

Wow this is a really great poem, I love the last stanza it's so true, artificial peace, excellent write 5/5

I loved this.
The wording used was excellent, and the imagery was astounding.
Excellent work.

This is beautifully written!!! i love the words you used, and it flowed so well!! great job!

Forever*Yours

Awe this is really really good .. i can relate and the words you choose flow so well and have so much meaning

Wow. At first I thought this poem would be this cliche poem with cliche everything. Rhyming, words, everything. And then I read it, and was like 'whoa.'

The rhyming just blew me away. It was far from cliche and they didn't seemed forced at all. The flow just came naturally. It was like reading a story, with short rhyming lines. =P

The idea of crimson artwork was...wow. I loved the idea so much. It expressed the thought so much better than what I could ever do with a cutting issue. =) Well done. 5/5 xxoo

Samantha

Sorry, but I personally dislike self-harm poems so the subject wasn't for me. Despite that, it was quite well written. The last two lines especially were very original and made a somewhat overused topic bareable.
Maybe you could consider punctuation?
Thanks for sharing.

I hate the thought of self mutalation, but you wrote this so well. It flowed very nicely.

marcella

I know exactly this emotion. Great expression.
5/5
~Stephen White