This is an amazing poem keep up the great work

Ohh. This was such a sweet poem!! I'm not very good at writing love poems but i love reading them!! heh.

a few suggestions though...

"Shh away my tears" < - you should try changing that...I know what you were trying to say here...but the "shh" makes the poem seem more like a child wrote it...you know?

and "missery" = "misery". Thats it. =]
Great poem though, I really enjoyed it!! Keep it up!!!

-Liz

Very good poem, short, sweet and right ti the point....GP

Once again i loved the way u layed out this poem, short, concise, great