Pavlov's theory. Hmm, that's a very interesting poem my friend. Oh wow, Darwin's theory. It's very true, these theories of human behaviour and human evolution I believe is true. Very nice touch adding a poetic effect to these theories. Although not in depth, but mentioned.

Your vocabulary in this was very good.. I also like the concept within the poem, it gives you something to think about. The flow was good as was the rhyming. Very unique piece and absolutely wonderful.. 5/5

Excellent. You had a great flow there were no points where I had to stop and reread something, ABSOLUTELY AMAZING vocabulary, and the whole meaning behind the poem was something that we all should think about.

I must say I have only read 4 of your poems so far, but these are purely a joy to read, never have I been so entranced by poetry as much as I am with yours. Wonderful job with this one, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Your very talented, great choice of words, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!