Wow that is a really good poem
for your age you are absolutly amazing
keep the work up
you will go far

Okay...this is so not a ONE on the scale. I don't know who put that. But I do see that it isn't the best. But it rhymes well, flows okay, and has a message. That's alot more than you can say for other poets. I'm gonna give it a 3 but I do want to read more of your stuff, cuz if this is you on a bad day, I'd love to see you on a good one!
Charisma*