Earthquake

by miipenguiinsocksrock   Nov 27, 2006


When you walked out my life
When you walked out my door
my heart for the first time cried
It felt ripped up and torn

When you you didn't love me,
Life for me felt so cold
Because expected us to be
together from now until we grew old

You said you would never leave me
You said you love me with all your heart
I thought it was true and believed every word
But you said we grew apart

My message is that I'll always love you
although thinking of you makes my heart ache
It feels trampled and scary
It feels just like an EARTHQUAKE!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tiffany

    That waz amazing!Better than anything I could ever write!

    ~Tiffany Alene~

  • 17 years ago

    by brittany

    Omg!! i loved it keep up the good work and can u please comment mine

    thanx
    brittany

  • 18 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Great poem
    just fix the first line
    "When you walked put my life"
    * out

    ok
    great write
    keep writing
    5/5
    ~Stevie

  • 18 years ago

    by jason

    Its good = )

  • 18 years ago

    by -Usmi-

    I rele liked it ... its simple and rele good .. keep it up ...

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