Very good poem keep up the good work. i liked it:) 5/5

You can feel the sadness in this read. Time heel all wounds young lady. May your heart be filled with peace and joy.

sadaddy

Very good poem i liked it

I rele liked it ... its simple and rele good .. keep it up ...

Its good = )

Great poem
just fix the first line
"When you walked put my life"
* out

ok
great write
keep writing
5/5
~Stevie

Omg!! i loved it keep up the good work and can u please comment mine

thanx
brittany

That waz amazing!Better than anything I could ever write!

~Tiffany Alene~