Comments : Darkness

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    It takes one to know one ... so I can understand what you write about. It's a hole I keep falling back into.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lets Rock

    Lovely piece, could feel your emotions flowing from every single word & yes we need no friends and no relatives as its only us who could change everything but only when we want to.

    Hope you want to change soon.

    May god bless you.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Thats so sad... and i know it's an old poem so i hope you feel better now cindy..
    It had some excellent wording nontheless..
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    Heart wrenching....loneliness is so unfair.

    As a poem 100.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so very sad, it brought tears to my eyes...but such a joy to read.
    The wording and imagery were fantastic.

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Great first poem. members need to read this too. to see how much you have learnt and how much better your poems are now. but don't get me wrong. i love this still!

    5/5 david

  • 14 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Its very true, not everyone can understand this horrible thing unless they have been there in the fight.

    "I love everyone and they love me."

    i used to think this, i try so hard still to believe this. makes you think the depression cant be if your loved.

    the feelings in this poem are expressed so clearly, and i can feel the pain in you when i read. i do hope this isnt still the case and that you have moved on in life with good things.

    i really do enjoy your work and will continue to read your stuff xxx