I think that it is great. i like it alot. it is different, good job. keep up the good work.5/5

Omg that is so cute, I realy loved it 5/5 keep it up.

Wow..kewlies..but isnt tht more lik a letter than a poem anywayz it was good..

Its a good poem... but try and break your lines up some, giving the readers some imagination

example

Things have been a little hard lately without you. I feel lost in the world. I feel so out of place everywhere I go. There is no one I can relate to, no one I can really talk to. I miss your touch, the comfortable feeling you gave me. I need you here to have someone to care and love me.

change to

with out you, the world is plain confusion
no matter where i go, i no longer belong
no relation, no words to be spoken
for with out you touch, there is no comfort left
i need your love back

if you break your lines up a bit, it will help people stay into your poetry.

-Terra