by Kasie
Great poem keep up the good work |
by Mo
Aww thats so cute that you have someone like that and the poem is so good because it brings the title in at the end which is when it is all pulled together. |
by emmerz
Hey the flow on this wasnt too great, but i love poems like this and you got the point across. maybe with a lil bit of work on the flow, it could be sumthin truly special! but good job on this anyways. |
Yet another great poem by you. I loved it. Although you repeated the word "My" way too much. Try and cut back on that, and even change it up with other words. The flow was ok and the structure was good. Keep up the good work. |
Cute poem.. |