"Like lightening painted on the plainest night,"
That image was beautiful.

Now this poem interested me, normally, i can't get into free verse easily but the flow and the wording of this poem just drew me in.
The message that is portrayed in this was done so cleverly. Especially in the very last line.
So true.
Excellent work!
5/5
*Gem*

OMG this was a very good poem!! I love all of ur poems, u are a way better writer than I am. You know how to use ur imagination very well, and you express in different ways how you feel. thats true poetry, and I hope you write more poems. 5/5 from me!!

.....a well-directed stream of consciousness.....

Arrite... that was brilliant!! well im not much of a romantic person dont believe in love and all that... but readin this I gotta tell u... i wanna be your fool...hehe..god bless keep writing! tata...

Hey thats ok if you dont belive me i understand its a sad thing to beleve