Belong

A great poem with a sad tone, you have showed great wors and great rhyming that gave a nice picture into the poem, keep up your great work and 5/5 from me.

Why isnt this one featured too???
but i cant seem to say,
what i really feel,
because its taken so long,
for these wounds to heal.
sometimes i feel this way too... its better to just keep it inside cause when you say what ur feeling it opensit back up

I really like it!! I especially liked how you said "because its taken so long,
for these wounds to heal."

It's really deep, and it kept me reading, but I think you could expand it a bit. My favorite favorite part is the first sentance. you expressed your emotions clearly and you have your point across unlike so many I haver ead lately. Its good. Keep it up. 5/5
sincerely
~skittles

I love this poem. It is a great read. Keep up the great work. Never stop writing:)

This is an AMAZING POEM! Your rhymes fit perfectly! and your flow and beat was amazing! and the whole poem Is to die for! Lemme just smooth out your stanza's for you:

There's something I feel,
Somewhere deep inside,
It isn't love, passion,
Or even pride.

The feeling is strong,
And makes me cry,
It's the feeling that,
I'm living a lie.

I've been like this,
For far too long,
And I've always known,
That it was wrong.

But I can't seem to say,
What I really feel,
Because its taken so long,
For these wounds to heal.

But inside I know,
That this life is wrong,
And this is not really,
Where I belong.

AMAZING! I loved you last stanza, I'm adding you to my favorites!

Excellent
5/5