by donna
Yeah.. this poem is sad.. I cant help but think this is how You feel about life.. This reminds me of the way I feel about my best friend.. |
This is an AMAZING POEM! Your rhymes fit perfectly! and your flow and beat was amazing! and the whole poem Is to die for! Lemme just smooth out your stanza's for you: |
by Brittany C
I love this poem. It is a great read. Keep up the great work. Never stop writing:) |
by ellewen
I really like it!! I especially liked how you said "because its taken so long, |
by steve
Why isnt this one featured too??? |
by Goran Rahim
A great poem with a sad tone, you have showed great wors and great rhyming that gave a nice picture into the poem, keep up your great work and 5/5 from me. |