Wow I really liked it. The whole thing caught my attention the whole way through as I read it. Good job and keep it up!

Hey
This poem is very true in the sense that sometimes people do get so low that they do just focus on all the bad. Not realising that they have people round about them who care and that is what is really important. You got across the reasons people do it and why. Great stroy, great poem.

Kelly
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