I really like this poem, you show the reader how much you really care for this person and it really does show. You did a really good job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!

Hey - thanx 4 ur comment - i didn't put thosa A/*l crap thingys in on purpose the comp does it automatically
sarah
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I love this poem..i understand it...i hate it when someone just wants to be just friends but you want something more then that...and when that happens that makes you fall in love...i think thats happening to me right now.
but hey say what i say
"stand strong and never let any one get you down becuse when that happens your letting your self get to you"
mumm.....kiis kiis

Omg... that poem is exactly how i feel about my best friend!!!! your a really good writer! you commented on one of my poems so i thought i would check yours out, and in reply to your comment, my ex is in jail now and i just recieved a letter from him to my surprise and yes, he does feel like a jerk!! lol. well done with ur poems! many kisses

Hello! great poem i love it haha and thanks for the comment it really got to me, im a beginner just started to write poems and im glad u like it as much as i love this poem u write, anyone can move on it just depends on what ur willing to give up and not knowing what ur gonna get :D like Clauida.. shes beautiful and perfect way better then that skank i was with.. she kicked me while i was down any1 can move on and im sure u can deep down in ur heart it still pumps with honor and courage, honor to recieve love and courage to love another