Now this is a nice way of informing everybody abt ur birthday... :o)
I really thought that this will be a happy going poem but i did found something sad abt it too, now i dont know the details but all i could figure out...doesnt sound good..well overall i liked the footnote as i could feel the excitement....hhmm

hv a great day tomm dear
all the best and take care

Awww its beautifull :)) like all your poems :))

Guhh it breaks my heart reading this...Hmm, not sure if you want sympathy or not hunnii so I'm not sure whether or not to give it, but honestly, seems like you grew up just fine without a mother...Look at you! Your a great person, but I do know the pain of missing someone you wish you can be close too whether you knew them or not....I liked your rhymes! Good write Gem!
Chels

Awh. I really like this.
Its very deep and actually means something. =) x

This is sad! I feel soo bad for you...Living without a mother, must be really tough! If it makes you write poems like this.....
xxoo