Hey i really like this poem...its really good keep up the good work!!! if you have time come and read my poems!!!

Again, beautifully written.
Very sweet and heatfelt, a pleasure to read.

Karl this is beautiful. I know the feelings of missing someone. Great job! Take Care Cindy

This is so sweet and cute and I loved the stanza about it coming back when you start kissing. that was funny. great job.

I really liked te word choice it was awesome, and the flow was great, and the emtion was clear, you have done another well done job. 5/5

Aawwww 5/5.. i can soo relate to this and a lot of other people probably can to.. when ur not with the one you love minutes seem like hours and days seem like years.. it is just amazing what someone else can do to you and you really did a great job writing about it and describing that feeling.. i think our writing styles have a few things in common lol.. great job and thanks for the comment =]

I miss that feeling....
its amazing what poetry is it lets us release feelings into words i can tell that you did that here great job

laura

Aww, it was so sweet, the emotions in this were unbelievable i know how you feel with this stanza
A minute without you,
Is 60 seconds to long,
Without you I feel sad and blue,
Without you I'm not strong

60 seconds feels like forever. 5/5

Good poem

This poem is so true! I haven't seen my boyfriend in almost a week and I've been going crazy! I actually called him and woke him up so he could hear it. Great job!

~Bobbi