More Than Usual

Although the beginning line for each stanza was the same, it never sounded like it was just repeating itself. You've chosen a great line to use, and you've used it so effectively for the poem! Astonishing write... 5/5

Although the beginning line for each stanza was the same, it never sounded like it was just repeating itself. You've chosen a great line to use, and you've used it so effectively for the poem! Astonishing write... 5/5

Such a sad poem really it made me cry and few poems can do that. i just wanted to tell you that as long as i've been on this site you are to only one that has such deep meanings to me at least. something told me that you should hear or atleast see what i wrote. great read:~)Sam

Wow this is a really deep but yet soo powerful.. its a really good poem. and I especially really liked how you repeated the "just the sight of it" it has a good flow to it good job and keep up the good work 5/5

Totally excellent is your expression,good job