by Jenni Marie Nov 28, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Is it possible to fall in love at first sight? |
Good story yes. A little on and of flow and different rhyme scheme trough the poem. |
by Sweet lig
Very romantic i can see the sweetness and its is full of love. very marvelous poet. the rhymes was so good and i think it written so well! and i like the flow great job of yours so keep it up!! 5/5 |
by *Isolde*
Wow that was a really great poem. I like the way you wrote it and all..5/5 keep it up. |
by Brittany C
Very good poem. I loved this poem. kee pup the good work. another 5/5. i don't there is anything you should chnage. this poem is good the way it is. |
by Gem
Now this! I can relate to! |