Amazing

I love it!!! This poem is an example of how my relationship is going at the moment in a way. How you ask if you are being s l u t t y. I am the same way. Especially because of my age. But yea I really like it! It is something true.

I really like how this rhymes and just goes together

"When we kissed
My heart missed several beats
We were so close that
I could feel your body\'s heat.\"
For a long poem this one kept me interested unlike many I have read. It\'s great! Keep it up.
5/5

I love it!!! This poem is an example of how my relationship is going at the moment in a way. How you ask if you are being s l u t t y. I am the same way. Especially because of my age. But yea I really like it! It is something true.

I really like how this rhymes and just goes together

"When we kissed
My heart missed several beats
We were so close that
I could feel your body\'s heat.\"
For a long poem this one kept me interested unlike many I have read. It\'s great! Keep it up.
5/5

Now this! I can relate to!
The whole poem seems to describe how so many girls feel.
Excellent write!
5/5
*Gem*

Very good poem. I loved this poem. kee pup the good work. another 5/5. i don't there is anything you should chnage. this poem is good the way it is.

Wow that was a really great poem. I like the way you wrote it and all..5/5 keep it up.

Very romantic i can see the sweetness and its is full of love. very marvelous poet. the rhymes was so good and i think it written so well! and i like the flow great job of yours so keep it up!! 5/5

Good story yes. A little on and of flow and different rhyme scheme trough the poem.
But it was good.

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