United

by Kurt   Nov 28, 2006


United we rise
United we fall
If we stand together
We will stand tall

In our world
We cannot stand alone
I love you
I'm letting it be known

United we are
Together so strong
My only question
Why it took so long

I knew it from the start
But you denied the emotion
Now we stand united
Connected by devotion

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  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Agree with Gemma, a trully refreshing poem. Light and airy. Good Job.

    Happiness
    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I knew it from the start
    But you denied the emotion
    Now we stand united
    Connected by devotion"

    A very powerful ending stanza.
    I liked the whole concept of this poem, it was a refreshing read.
    5/5
    *Gem*