by young and innocent Nov 28, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
|
My innocent face shows all the hurt and all of the painful emotions you have put me through |
by Kurt
|
Interesting poem. Written with emotion yet not sounding too desperate or over emotional. Overall not bad. |
by ariana
|
Mmhmmm.... |
|
The question we all ask in life when we have been unfairly treated, why? its good and clearly shows the hurt of the person, tiny crit, it should be - i have feelings too, not to. other than that, well done :) |