by Brittany Nov 28, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
One hit, |
by ellewen
This is very powerful. I understand it. It's very well organized, I like how you repeated youself, and you used allot of emotion. It seemed like a story, but I think you could expand the middle a little more. I like your ending though. But it's great I just wish there was more to it. |