Abusive Nursery Rhyme

by Brittany   Nov 28, 2006


One hit,
Two hit,
Three hit,
Four...
Pick me up and slam me to the floor,

One hit,
Two hit,
Three hit,
Four...
You hit me and you yell at me,
And then you hit once more.

One hit,
Two hit,
Three hit,
Four...
When morning comes
There will be no more.

I won't move,
Not utter a sound,
I'll just lay there,
Helpless and dieing on the ground.

One hit,
Two hit,
Three hit,
Four...
I'm still lying there bleeding--
On the bathroom floor.

One hit,
Two hit,
Three hit,
Four...
Look at me now,
I am no more.....

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  • 17 years ago

    by ellewen

    This is very powerful. I understand it. It's very well organized, I like how you repeated youself, and you used allot of emotion. It seemed like a story, but I think you could expand the middle a little more. I like your ending though. But it's great I just wish there was more to it.
    5/5
    sincerely
    ~skittles