Comments : Abusive Nursery Rhyme

  • 18 years ago

    by ellewen

    This is very powerful. I understand it. It's very well organized, I like how you repeated youself, and you used allot of emotion. It seemed like a story, but I think you could expand the middle a little more. I like your ending though. But it's great I just wish there was more to it.
    5/5
    sincerely
    ~skittles