Bloodlust

by Jessica   Nov 28, 2006


Mirror mirror on the wall
Oh how I'd love to kill them all -

The taste of blood upon my lips
The coldness of my fingertips
The stare within my lifeless eyes
A plan without a compromise

A forceful stumble to the floor
Such sweet sobs just before
Before the plunge into his vein
Such venom that my fangs contain

I'll lead him to a dormant state
No longer will his pain inflate
This joy will reach a sudden end
My strength will once more ascend

Into the very dead of night
I'm off to have another bite
Mirror mirror on the wall
Oh how I'd love to kill them all.

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  • 16 years ago

    by zariieee

    I love vampires, and I love this.
    Good job =]
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Steven Topaz

    I read the first half stanza and for some oddd reason i was laughing through the rest.
    "Mirror mirror on the wall,
    Oh how I'd like to kill them all"
    Killer lyrics. lol <---- Still laughing

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Perfect! You don't know this about me yet, but I'm a 'truth teller'. I vote my true thoughts and I speak my true thoughts, and I don't bullshit just because we're buddies. This, I genuinly thought, was/is flawless. I couldn't see a single thing wrong. I loved the structure, the flow, the tone, the rhymes, everything, and that's why I'm putting this piece in my 'favorite poems' section.

    Brad

    P.S. I very, very, very rarely vote a piece 5/5, but I did this piece.

  • 17 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    I LIKE IT!!!
    theres something very michivious about this poem.
    makes you want to give an evil laugh!
    visit my poems in the fantasy section
    Kat!-x-

  • 17 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    Awesome!!!
    i reallt love this poem
    your writings really strong and it flows so well
    good work!

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