by ForeverGoneInYourEyes Nov 28, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Your laugh |
by stefanie
Great poem... i can feel the emotion coming out of it.... its deep... great job and great use of words. |
by Michelle18
Awwwwww this is so sweet..it has alot of passion in it.i love it! |
by Leanne
Definately 5/5 |
Your last two lines I love the best, they made me smile. Your rhyming and vocab. where awesome. and the flow and beat of it was great! You did an amazing job on this. You really have a nack for writing poems, Great Job! |
by Mousie
This was a really beautiful poem, she'd be lucky to have you. wonderful job 5/5 |