Very interesting style used here. I thought the start and end seemed to be split into two different poems, they didn't really suit each other, but overall this was good. :)

I really like this! It has just inspired me! If you hadnt already written this I would add on a bit.

Your laugh
(such a sweet sound, almost like a lullaby)
Your smile
(That lets me know your mine)
Your cry
(I love how you share youself with me)
Your yell
(why not for the h e ll of it)
Your face
(the complection of an angel)
Your body
(I want you even more, just at the thought)
Your walk
(gracefull as the one I adore)
Your everything
(I love how you make me soar through the trees
amazing as the voice I recieve
Greatfull as the thoughts I retrieve
I love the way I perceive your words)
They all make my body stiff
I get lost in my mind around you
Your just so contagious
(How I would love to see you
in the making of my soal)
How do you do it
It's intoxicating
I've lost my footing talking about you
(I miss your presence
wishing I was talking TO you)
I beg you
Please remember me forever
Because you make everything okay
(in such a way I cannot begin to describe)
Your just so contagious!
(It's outrageous)

That is what I would have done. I swear Im not picking on your poem at all!!!! I was just inspired. If you like it (not saying you will) but you could change it to that if you would like. but without (this)
That was just to show who wrote what. I am not going to submitt that because they are mostly your words and I cant. But yeah, I hope you like it. lol sorry if that bothers you.
sincerely
~skittles

I really like this! It has just inspired me! If you hadnt already written this I would add on a bit.

Your laugh
(such a sweet sound, almost like a lullaby)
Your smile
(That lets me know your mine)
Your cry
(I love how you share youself with me)
Your yell
(why not for the h e ll of it)
Your face
(the complection of an angel)
Your body
(I want you even more, just at the thought)
Your walk
(gracefull as the one I adore)
Your everything
(I love how you make me soar through the trees
amazing as the voice I recieve
Greatfull as the thoughts I retrieve
I love the way I perceive your words)
They all make my body stiff
I get lost in my mind around you
Your just so contagious
(How I would love to see you
in the making of my soal)
How do you do it
It's intoxicating
I've lost my footing talking about you
(I miss your presence
wishing I was talking TO you)
I beg you
Please remember me forever
Because you make everything okay
(in such a way I cannot begin to describe)
Your just so contagious!
(It's outrageous)

That is what I would have done. I swear Im not picking on your poem at all!!!! I was just inspired. If you like it (not saying you will) but you could change it to that if you would like. but without (this)
That was just to show who wrote what. I am not going to submitt that because they are mostly your words and I cant. But yeah, I hope you like it. lol sorry if that bothers you.
sincerely
~skittles

When u fall in love with someone everything they do is magic and they rub off on you more then u realize excellent write 5/5

Nice job. Understandable and straightforward. There were some words like "your" that should have been "You're" Other than that, the only other thing i didn't like was the yelling line. Keep it up

This was a really beautiful poem, she'd be lucky to have you. wonderful job 5/5

Your last two lines I love the best, they made me smile. Your rhyming and vocab. where awesome. and the flow and beat of it was great! You did an amazing job on this. You really have a nack for writing poems, Great Job!

5/5

Definately 5/5
I loved that poem, made me smile form start to finish, i just hope that one day i have someone that feels as strongly about me as you have described in this poem and i'll be a lucky girl =D

Awwwwww this is so sweet..it has alot of passion in it.i love it!

Great poem... i can feel the emotion coming out of it.... its deep... great job and great use of words.