Wow. i really like this poem. its really good. thanks a lot for the rate on my poem.
'i cant stand it any longer
i need to get away from this place
i need to leave these people
no longer show my face'
i really like this part.

Thea this is such a great poem, it's like how im feeling i just cant get the words into a poem like you can :( i really hope your okay, im always here and dont worry about getting me down or anyything, you help loads just by talking to me xx

Wow, excellent choice of wordin. this poem was really good. i could understand how u felt by the end of this. Good job :)

Excellent poem, I liked the flow and the way you expressed emotions in it. Good choice of words, too.

Great poem

Nice poem.. i love it, so emotional