Very very powerful
I loved the wording that you used, especially the phrase 'curtain of light'.
It created some powerful images.
Well done, it's an amazing poem
5/5
*gem*

Awww a sad poem :( i did enjoy reading it :))99/5

Wow thats an amazing poem. i love it. it makes me sad cuz i can relate.. thanx for commenting on me.. sorry its taken a while for me to comment u. i havent been on this site for a while.. if u ever wana talk, u can email me.. im always here. i lvoe this poem.
take care
luve angie

I love this poem. its really good. your created perfect images in my mind.

I love the way you write, your poems are so powerful and effective.

I like the way you write, its individual and conveys a distinct message with other less obvious ones. Very thought provoking and relates to me on all different levels.

I never used to understand cutting until I emailed someone with some questions and found the same way I had used not sleeping to numb myself , was exactly what she was doing, now I understand, nice poem

This is realy good. i like how you start the poem off slowly then you put alot of emotion into the end.

Wow that is so beautifully written. keep up the good work!

**I've left with yesterday and his memories ** oooo i really liked the ending. n_n very nice poem 5/5