by GoodMorning
Very interesting poem. ;P |
Good peice, it is very well written (if in an interesting form/mannor) it really draws in the reader and holds them throughout. |
by Polly
Thea it's awesome i really like it. somehow id rather being like that than not be able to do anything about it... if you get what i mean :S |
by Jen
Wow very well expressed, i liked the structure and everything, and i usually dont like poems that dont rhyme so yaaay! |
I liekd this poem. The word usage was really cool, and it had a good flow. I thought you hsould of used punctuation but apart from that i really enjoyed it. its about a topic that affects me so that made me more intrested in it. Keep it up! xx |
Wow your very talented =o]. i loved this! if you ever need someone to talk to im here =o] |
by Woe
Are you? |
by Riffy
Wow this is great :) |
by Carrotgirl
I agree with Riffy above, facing things is often the key great poem, you might want to join them to selves and you have un written. |