Lots of emotion, very nice write.

5/5

Oh my. This was short, but sweet. I could feel some of the feeling that you put into this piece. Wow. Just wow. Amazing flow, and every fit into place. I like this stanza the most:

Lastly I would like to apologize,
For not making it last yesterday.
But if I saw you in that casket asleep,
I wouldn't have anything to say.

Breathtaking. I'm going to read it again. :]

5.0/5.0
Christina Hurley.

Life seems unfair at times wouldnt you agree? if this was really a part of your past... then im proud of you for trying at a better life by leaving. i respect you the more you keep writing. very nice :]