My heart

by Im Just Kelsie   Nov 28, 2006


My heart was full
my heart was pure
my hear was everything
till you came near.
you said you'd keep it
you said you'd love it
you said you wouldn't break it,
but that you'd cherish it
so i gave you my heart
yet, a little nervous to start
but as my trust grew
i learned to love you too.
you treated me well
kept me close
held me tight
and wouldn't let go
but as time past by
you let me go
you broke my heart
like i thought you would
my heart was full
my heart was pure
my heart was everything
till you came near...

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  • 17 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    This happened to me a couple years ago.

    unfortunely the event made mehh somewhat.
    [bitter] i guess thatz what i could call it. .

    && ive unintentionally done this to other people.
    just one or two.
    && i regret it. b/c they were some really great guyz.
    but ive fckd up. :[

    5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Anna

    I really like this poem, mainly cuz i can relate to it.

  • 18 years ago

    by finally just me

    Hey buddie i love ur poem.... put more of them on u have so many good ones!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Great start! I like it. Keep it smooth...