Awww...Thats so sweet
I really liked the ending
Nice flow
Even though it didnt rhyme much it still had a rhythm to it
Which was cool!
All round cool Poem!
Well done

Keep Smiling
*`-Love Sucks

OH PS: sorry for the late comment and thank you for the comment on my poem :)

Hhhmmm.....nice poem dudey
Love ur writing
Love Jade xXxXx

Perfect perfect last line... x