It's good, booger. =)
really.

i love you.
and you know, if you ever need to talk, i'm here for you.

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I really like this. I think it's well written, and says alot for a small amount of words. I had to check the meaning of Achromatic.. lol. Anyway, good write. =] 5/5

Tammie xo

Its a excellent poem 5/5 keep it up.

I really liked the last line. It reminds me of a song. I don't remember which one, or who it's by, but it sounds so much like a song to me!! Anyways nice job Nat!!

I agree, very nice job. You were able to put such strong emotions into just a few lines. You're a very talented writer, keep it up! Loved it! 5/5

Stephanie

I love this poem. It's really good. 5/5

Sometimes the most simple words can mean the most.

`Ange!a

Um...i'm not sure what to say, except, that i think it's good, and not to deep!
have fun