Missing you

by Lisa   Nov 29, 2006


~hey guys i worte this poem and it took me so long and plz olz comment on it it well mean so much to me and i will do the favor back thaxs~

When you took your last breathe
i felt like i lost myself
the phone called i received
was more i can handle

it didnt really get to me
at first
and when it did
it was the moment i lost myself

i could berely breathe
i just lost myself
you died so young
and token away from my arms

took all my happiness
and throw it away
it took apart of me
when you slipped away

i feel so unhappy
that you are not around
the softness of your voice
i miss it very much

and your gentle touch
it made me happy again
when you walked into my life
you made everthing alright

and now my days are cold
and it all seems so sad
there is no doubt
that i miss you so much

and i hate my life now
everthing is not the same
the good days are gone
and its been so different

not the same without you here
and not listen to anyone
its been so hard
since you died that day

and i feel so different
still cant believed its true
i miss you
yes, i really miss you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Meegzz

    I really like this its so sad yet it means so much!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by abby

    Hey i really love this poem and i cant help but cry when i read it. my grandmother died about 6th months ago... and she was very young. although i miss her i know she is in a better place. ~abby~