My nightmare

by sam   Nov 29, 2006


It was a shout
and so clear
she was gone
without a doubt

once i thought
of US together
but as of late
there's no longer forever

for you and i
all is at stake
will we bend
or will we break

you say this is best
but i cannot see
me without you;
you leaving me

and now i sit
in the cold and stare
should i quit
am i alone; do you care?

this is mewithout you
so much we did share
now add this tragedy
my living nightmare

love you, and comments too!

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    A fairly good poem...you rhyme nicely. My only suggestion is work on your flow and rhyme scheme a little more. Your first stanza doesn't flow like the others. But I liked this stanza the best!
    for you and i
    all is at stake
    will we bend
    or will we break

    Good job...keep going!
    Charisma*