Comments : Heartbeat and A Dying Mind

  • 17 years ago

    by Killikana

    Wow your awsome. ...That covers it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, very nicely worded totheter, and it shows great emotion.......
    I like the way you divided the lines, it gaves a great taste of reading, keep it up. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by hikarikitti

    Alright-tuh! ^^b

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    Great poem...luv da originality n flows beautifully! =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    I really enjoyed this,It was unique in its style,Basic honesty, a concept not often written about or practiced. I especially liked the ending,just a simple "no" says it all. Very well done!