Wow, very good:) its full of emotion.

I love the ending:
Tell me to warn this new girlfriend,
Since you'll just break her heart.
Tell me to tell her,
How much you tore me apart...

I gave you 5/5;) keep up the good work

Sadly I can relate. I just went through this. I have a new site on elite skills. eliteskills.com/u/brokenangelkat
since you liked my work so much