Empty

by Kenneth   Nov 29, 2006


I was wrong about my void
I thought I was sealing the void
But I was just empowering it
I was trying to fill it with pieces that did not fit
I felt and seemed happy
But now I am feeling crappy
Now my mind is crashing
My fantasies falling and smashing
The void is taking my soul
And is turning it into coal
I want to save myself
But I will only damn myself
Because I do not want pain for any other
But I want to be with another
To hold and comfort me
and for me to be free
Of my endless nightmare
But that would not be fair
To dump my problems on them
And force my pain on them
But it is becoming to great
Is this my fate
To suffer in agony
I have fallen onto my knee
Its now a matter of time
Until then I will try to act fine
To spare others my pain
As I slowly go insane
My life seems like funny tragedy
In which I have no remedy
That can spare the people I hold dear
So I begin to tremble in fear
Pondering how to solve this puzzle
Before I am too deep in this trouble
I feel so completely empty
I just want to stop feeling so empty
Is that so wrong.
To want someone for so long
To make your self happy
Instead of feeling so empty

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  • 17 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    "I felt and seemed happy
    But now I am feeling crappy"

    HAHAHAH lol that was pretty amusing...

    "The void is taking my soul
    And is turning it into coal"

    so simply written

    "I want to save myself
    But I will only damn myself"
    "Because I do not want pain for any other
    But I want to be with another"

    Oh I like that, that is deep ~~~

    I like your two ending lines....it's so true.....life is a hole...thats all ive learnt 0_0
    i liked this poem!!! its the best so far which ive read.....good job!
    =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Tess

    Great poem, I have no doubt that others can relate to it. Keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Hi kenneth...
    thanx 4 the comment..i am not that okay caz my boyfriend dumped me 4 no reason becaz all the other guys were makin fun of him so he just went along with his friends..well i am sry if i am talkin about my self too much lol anywayz sweet poem!!!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by ShAtTeReD HeArT

    Is that so wrong.
    To want someone for so long
    To make your self happy
    Instead of feeling so empty
    this is a very true sentence and everyone wants someone to feel good inside not empty and im sry for u i know the way u feel cause i feel the same... cold and un-happy no one to hold!

  • 18 years ago

    by HuggyQueenofCookies

    So sad...

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