So sad...

Is that so wrong.
To want someone for so long
To make your self happy
Instead of feeling so empty
this is a very true sentence and everyone wants someone to feel good inside not empty and im sry for u i know the way u feel cause i feel the same... cold and un-happy no one to hold!

Hi kenneth...
thanx 4 the comment..i am not that okay caz my boyfriend dumped me 4 no reason becaz all the other guys were makin fun of him so he just went along with his friends..well i am sry if i am talkin about my self too much lol anywayz sweet poem!!!!!!!!!!

Great poem, I have no doubt that others can relate to it. Keep writing.

"I felt and seemed happy
But now I am feeling crappy"

HAHAHAH lol that was pretty amusing...

"The void is taking my soul
And is turning it into coal"

so simply written

"I want to save myself
But I will only damn myself"
"Because I do not want pain for any other
But I want to be with another"

Oh I like that, that is deep ~~~

I like your two ending lines....it's so true.....life is a hole...thats all ive learnt 0_0
i liked this poem!!! its the best so far which ive read.....good job!
=)