Hiding From The World

by Kristina   Nov 29, 2006


She just wants to hide,
Just wants to be alone.
She's lonely and depressed,
And everything is a mess.

She can't stand her life,
And all that shes been through.
No one understands her pain,
But they pretend they do.

But they don't know,
All the things she hides,
Or about the many tears,
That she has cried.

She feels so worthless,
Unwanted and used.
There's nothing good in her life,
She's only been abused.

Crying herself to sleep every night,
Cause she doesn't know what to do.
Waking up and pretending,
That everything is just fine.

Nobody looks hard enough,
Into her pretty blue eyes,
To see that she's not okay,
No matter what she says.

The pain is all with-held inside,
So no one can see,
The things she has been through,
Or the life that she leads.

Copyright © March 27, 2006 - Kristina M

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  • 17 years ago

    by awww

    Nice... i like it... hiding from the world whats inside... it hit me all the more because thats what i've been doing... the meaning and scenery really flowed through the poem... i could just imagine everything so easily... great job... 5/5!

    ~angel~

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was another one that I loved, it really got to me, and made me think about the fact that just because someone seems happy, that isn't always true.
    You are a wonderful writer, and I hope you never give up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Good i loved the beginngin except for a few things. and the ending was well written.. but together they made me mad again. because of the broken rhyme scheme. also this line annoyed me-
    Nothing good has happened in her life,
    i think you should shorten it . maybe to
    There's nothing good in her life
    or
    Nothing good ever happens
    or something shorter cause that line throws off the flow.
    i really like this stanza-
    Nobody looks hard enough,
    Into her pretty blue eyes,
    To see that she's not okay,
    No matter what she says.
    but i dont like how it doesnt match the rest. lol
    So no one can see,- i think this should be a little longer.(myb)-So no body will ever see,? hmr idk

    but i really did like thispoem. despite what i write in comments. i'm just OCD and watn every little thing to be perfect in others' work(not my own) so i guess im a hypocrite too!

    xD

    x3 Lauren

  • 17 years ago

    by ashley

    5/5 i felt like you kno who i am because if it wasnt for the blue eyes part everything was screaming my feelings....and what people have done...

  • 17 years ago

    by Randomness

    I enjoyed this poem. I liked the style. It was very deep in meaning. Reminds me of many I know including me. You did very well on this poem. 5/5

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