This poem is very deep. Makes me think about when I was a teenager. Keep up the good work! 5/5

Wow i think that was a really good poem, makes me think alot about me ^^^^^^
that poems really sad
meXXX

Wow i think that was a really good poem, makes me think alot about me ^^^^^^
that poems really sad
meXXX

I like your stye!!! this poem make me think about this one girl at my school...its really dark and cool keep up the good work!!!
-teardrop

I enjoyed this poem. I liked the style. It was very deep in meaning. Reminds me of many I know including me. You did very well on this poem. 5/5

5/5 i felt like you kno who i am because if it wasnt for the blue eyes part everything was screaming my feelings....and what people have done...

Good i loved the beginngin except for a few things. and the ending was well written.. but together they made me mad again. because of the broken rhyme scheme. also this line annoyed me-
Nothing good has happened in her life,
i think you should shorten it . maybe to
There's nothing good in her life
or
Nothing good ever happens
or something shorter cause that line throws off the flow.
i really like this stanza-
Nobody looks hard enough,
Into her pretty blue eyes,
To see that she's not okay,
No matter what she says.
but i dont like how it doesnt match the rest. lol
So no one can see,- i think this should be a little longer.(myb)-So no body will ever see,? hmr idk

but i really did like thispoem. despite what i write in comments. i'm just OCD and watn every little thing to be perfect in others' work(not my own) so i guess im a hypocrite too!

xD

x3 Lauren

This was another one that I loved, it really got to me, and made me think about the fact that just because someone seems happy, that isn't always true.
You are a wonderful writer, and I hope you never give up.

Nice... i like it... hiding from the world whats inside... it hit me all the more because thats what i've been doing... the meaning and scenery really flowed through the poem... i could just imagine everything so easily... great job... 5/5!

~angel~