Comments : I Cut Just Because

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Incredible
    Love it, and keep writing new poems, although this is old.
    I can ttly relate to this.
    I like the slight goriness.
    Write some new ones like this... but longer

    Keep up the writing!
    5/5
    ~Stevie

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow again you are a good writter, this is short but I like it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Slightly Cliche and Short. but u added a twist to this topic. and it showed some truth in how it makes the pain go away only for a short time and then you become addicted. adn have to do it again.

    Good Job. =]

    x3 *Lauren

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    -ps i think you should try to add more to this, make it more personal- or inthe opposite more broad-talk aobut othre people and their reasons or w/e lol

  • 17 years ago

    by awww

    Short but precise... just like a cut on the arm... very nice... you were straight to the point here... even if it was short it made quite an impact on me... nicely done... good flow...

    ~angel~

  • 17 years ago

    by Rona

    This was an interesting one. i know so many people who can relate. it's strange how we inflict physical pain on ourselves to try and cover our emotional pain.
    great poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by jessi

    This is really good!
    i feel this way and untill i read this i never knew it..