Incredible |
by UnToLd TrUtH
Wow again you are a good writter, this is short but I like it. 5/5 |
Slightly Cliche and Short. but u added a twist to this topic. and it showed some truth in how it makes the pain go away only for a short time and then you become addicted. adn have to do it again. |
-ps i think you should try to add more to this, make it more personal- or inthe opposite more broad-talk aobut othre people and their reasons or w/e lol |
by awww
Short but precise... just like a cut on the arm... very nice... you were straight to the point here... even if it was short it made quite an impact on me... nicely done... good flow... |
by Rona
This was an interesting one. i know so many people who can relate. it's strange how we inflict physical pain on ourselves to try and cover our emotional pain. |
by jessi
This is really good! |