Nice poem Jason, I liked it. 5/5

I really like it, It would make a great song! keep up the good work !

Great poem I just think you could have made a better ending for it either then that loved it

SWEET POEM IT ROCKS!!

Wow really good..really could make someone think twice about hurting themselves

take care..xoxo
vic

Ur poems are uplifiting, thye remind me that life is worht living even when it seems like it isnt....keep up the positive mentality and i hope that ur following the same advice ur giving us from ur poems. best of luck. ttyl

lissa