There is heaps of emotion in this hun. It's really well written, with a great story in it. Keep it up. =] 5/5

Tammie xo

Oh wow...this took my breath away, especially the last two lines, they were really sad.
This is another favourite of mine.
You have lots of talent.
Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

I love it. You're a lovely writing, keep it up.

I meant you're a lovely writer...

hehe. sorry for that.

x

I loved the emotion conveyed here. Very strong. You're definitely a very talented writer. Nice job. :]