by Jenni Marie Nov 29, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
It's getting closer to when I'll see you again |
Wonderful write, the emotion within was great. I loved it. The flow started out good, got a little choppy towards the end, but overall was good. The structure was good. And I loved your word choice. Great Job, Keep up the Excellent work. |
by jack
I can relate to waht you are ssaying. plus i love the poem. xkeep it upx |
Nice Poem, I Know The Feeling Well Wrote Keep Up The Good Work |