You think people don'tcare.
but someone's always there
look harder
go farther
don't die to live
learn to forgive
apretiate life around you

This poem is full of so much pain

How so sad... I like the way you make your poem be in the real world...

Good poem.. Keep up the nice work. It is so full of pain and emotion

Very short but to the point. i like this. once again i know what your saying. have u ever listend to psychopathic music? let me know 5/5

I like this poem the most cause i know what you felt when you wrote it.Congratulations,you have done a great work.Best regards,Michelle XxX

Trust me I can feel your pain you just have to take it to live sometimes

I like the strong words! =D u have inspried meh to write a new poem! ^-^

<,,xQuentinX,,>

Great poem... it reminds meh of how i feel...>.> i can relate! great job, i cant really say anything... that poem took the words away from meh! XD great job!!! keep it up and never lose that talent!!!
^_^
~*~Skye~*~

Woah thats really good! i really like your poems i'm going to add you to my favourites

Death ??

waht is death ? an ending or a begning? is it really teh end of pain or the begining of it

think of it good before you think of death .

thsi piece , was a great one , expression is flawless adn so the rhyming

but i would prefer if you speperate it into doublet , and not keep it 1 block , it willbe perfect too ^_^
5/5

No comment its just woooow i liiiiiiiiiiiike it

No comment its just woooow i liiiiiiiiiiiike it

Omg this is a wonderful poem its meaning ful and etc

I like this
it is short and to the point
easy to read and
not very hard to interpret
i found the beginning to be powerful
and it caught my attention
and the last line was quite sad

good job

Keenan

I love every line to this poem 5/5