Datz iz gud.. I understand how is happening. Gurl, keep it going. ;-)

What do you mean not your best? lol Each poem i read touches me in one way or another, its poems like yours that give me a reason to struggle thru one more day keep writing :)))

U may have been bored and it is a very good poem!

Cathey
believe me that was such a touching poem it realy relates to me. it was your great work.

Cause I'm sorry boy I love you to death
But there is no chance I'm going to live with another regret.

i loved that stanza
5/5

take care bye

Wow remarkable poem, I loved it so intensely, outstanding words and I love the way you put it, bravo bravo bravo!!!